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Commission: Pandemonium by =IsoPlexus:iconIsoPlexus:


©2007-2009 =IsoPlexus
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Submitted: December 9, 2007
File Size: 590 KB
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Resolution: 800×980
Comments: 6
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Completed commission for Pande:heart:. I had this mostly finished for the longest time, I just needed to add some color and tweak some things then add a background. She said a city skyline at night in a field so.. I tried :[ My backgrounds are always so poor and lazy lmao I don't know why. I think I need to start doing landscape and scenery with no characters on it and go from there.

She is modeled after the Twins in the Matrix (whichihaveneverseen). 8)

She's a little off balance and I tried to even it out with her tail but you can still tell a bit.

Pandemonium (c) Morgan
Art (c) Rebecca A. Russell (R.A.R07)
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Wow lovely work! I like the details of the folds in the clothes and the background goes nicely with her too, she stands out from it.

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The :cheese: will not protect you! Zorak is ma sex muffin! :b0x0rz: I am currently :stereo: and completely :batty: lol! All hail :spork: !!

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your art is amazing :heart:
Love your style and shading :]

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Wow, this is neat :D I really love the cloth folds and fur details, very nicely done :3
Only critique I could offer would be to darken and blue up the grass. Yellow doesn't show well at night.

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Love her expression. And you're not the only one that sucks at background. x_X

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ughhh not only are you amazing at animals but your good at clothes too

*dies*

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"I refuse to be a leader and I'll always show my genitals or do something which prevents me from being Martin Luther King or Gandhi and getting killed." John Lennon
I think the main issue in this piece is that everything is in the middle. The character is in the middle, the horizon line is smack in the middle as well, which makes the image less interesting and a bit stagnant. To adjust this (at least for future reference), have the character standing to one side, either drop or raise the horizon line, and encourage the viewer's eye to travel around the image rather than leaving us stuck in the middle. Another suggestion is allowing the city to run off at least one side of the page.

And the grass brush ... I suggest avoiding it like the plague. If you do use it, only put it in the foreground as that's where all the detail will be and render grass in the background by hand since things that move away from us should get less-defined and blurry, not just smaller.

You do maintain very good structure and ability in rendering the figure. You either did a lot of research on the clothing, or have some natural knowledge in rendering them as they are also quite believable. The character overall is fantastic, but, again, the composition kills the effectiveness of the piece.

Let me know if you ever tire or become annoyed by these comments ....

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